Introduction – I did not change much in my introduction. I added two sentences towards the end of it because my ideas didn’t flow very well. I feel as though the sentence i added made my introduction easier to understand.
Evidence and Explanations – My first draft was very short and mainly included Nair and Nair. I knew moving forward into my final draft I would need to involve Gee and Haas, thats exactly what I did. I used Gee’s building tasks identities, connections and relationships. I used Haas study of Eliza to show rhetorical development.
Reorganization – I did not move much around, there were quotes that I went back and introduced better.
New Paragraphs – Most of my paper ended up being new because of the fact that my first draft was so short. I added a few more body paragraphs and and conclusion to wrap up all of my ideas. once I got a grasp on my ideas and was able to map out a plan I felt it was easier to finish the paper. Getting started was the worst part for me.
