- My first draft was very short therefore I have not yet divulged Gee in any depth. However, I have gotten feedback from my peers and now have a better understanding of how i can incorporate Gee into my paper. I plan on writing about his “identities” and “relationship” building tasks and how the two work together in Science Discourse.
- My first body paragraph talks mainly about the role of IMRAD. like i said in question 1, I now have a better understanding of what it is I need to do and therefore incorporate solid pieces of language into my new paragraphs that I hope will work well.
- My paragraph about the role of IMRAD is very informative, however, I feel as though I can add more “i say” sentences in there to help strengthen it overall.
- Although my first draft was short, by doing these exercises and the peer review in class and on my own I feel as though I’ve been able to help better my understanding of science discourse. By incorporating Haas and Gee as well the role of IMRAD I basically give a guiding of how it is to enter science Discourse. The route that must be taken to fully achieve a science discourse might take some time but with careful attention to detail it most certainly can be done.
First Year Studies
