- In my first draft for paper 3 I use both Alexander and Williams. I use quotes from each explaining the identities that students create while acquiring literacy skills. My peers seem to think i do a good job of using the quotes to support my ideas but they also believe that i can do a better job of explaining them as well as go into more depth during my explanation. as i move to my final draft i need to explain more about my thoughts. I believe i show a decent amount of evidence but a better explanation will make my paper stronger.
- The comments from my peers show me that i do a good job of introducing quotes from alexander and williams but i need to do a better job of explaining them. I think i need to use more quotes from the scholarly texts followed by a deeper explanation.
- I think i do a decent job of using quotes from the scholarly texts as well as the literacy narratives. i can definitely add more quotes from the scholarly texts as well as another literacy narrative. so far i think i have done a decent job in this area but looking forward to my final draft there is a lot of work that i need to do.
First Year Studies
